Wednesday, December 21, 2011

How to Deal with Story Challenges: You Write

So I'm winding down the last few pages of a story challenge...

But what does one do with prompts like this??

1. the setting ~ a bar that magically appears as a haven to those who have been dumped on NYE

2. some background to one of the main protags ~ one has never had a NYE kiss and is determined that this will be the year

3. another character/s ~ an unusual trio of fairy dragmothers in all shapes, sizes and powers

4. a conflict ~ the main characters are officially strangers but have a history of – seeing each other at the most embarrassing moments

5. an object/phrase/theme/whatever to be mentioned in the story somewhere ~ pickled eggs

Thank you very much, Kris from Kris 'n' Good Books for such a great challenge. I should have this story~Dragma's Tavern~for y'all just in time for New Year's Eve. Best of all, no matter how silly it turns out to be, it's FREE! I'll blog about it further on my site bryltyne.com when it's finished.

Here's a sneak preview:



"Where're we going?" I shifted in my seat, checked and confirmed the blocked door and window locks as inconspicuously as possible. Obviously, we weren't going "out" anytime soon, other than outside of town by the looks of the rapidly passing barren landscape. "I take it your intentions over the last few weeks have been more business oriented than pleasure." I said it with a chuckle, hoping he'd change his mind since this was New Year's Eve. For chrissake, who'd rather shoot someone at the stroke of midnight than kiss? I wouldn't; I was a lover not a fighter. Too bad my family didn't see it that way. He cleared his throat, and I met a look I couldn't quite read. "Really." That's about all I could think to say as I stared into his eyes. Eyes that said no more than "I'm not here for games." Neither was I. Not now.

To think I actually entertained the thought that he might be the one. I looked back out the window and at the darkening horizon. Joe, Jim... John—Yeah, from this moment forward, I'd refer to this stooge—my latest liar of a boyfriend, for this wasn't the first time this'd happened to me—as John. Three weeks ago when we'd met for the first time at Porgy's, he'd told me his name was Steve, but if he tried to tell me the truth now, I had no reason to believe him. Sometimes they did that, just before pulling the trigger or snapping open their switchblades; some crazy notion came over them to confess all their sins to me... as if that would change the outcome of their destination.

Why me? That was my question as the limo sped along the highway, toward the Ruby Mountains: why was I—the youngest of four—voted most likely heir to a family business I wanted no part of to begin with. Besides, what bragging rights are there in making your fortune in pickled eggs? So, gramps had diversified and landed this protection gig in Elko, one my godfather, Franky, insisted I carry on since my father had disappeared—rumored to have become part of the courthouse foundation—long before I was out of diapers. No matter how enterprising my ancestors were, didn't mean I was proud of the path they'd chosen. 

I hated my life.

"Listen, we don't have to do this," I said, offering what's his name a chance to change his mind as I met his gaze once more—a gaze that told me he was set in his decision. But his smirk told me his resolve came from money than conviction. "One last chance to change your mind."

In less time than it took me to swallow my disgust, his growing smile garnered my left knee, and the back of his head reflected off my corresponding elbow. The limo swerved, accommodating our tumble into a pile on the floor. A series of short jabs later, a flip of my wrist, perfect hand placement, a quick snap. Jim, Joe, Bob, Ray... Steve—John lay crumpled and lifeless.

Brushing the dust from my lapels, I retook my seat. Seconds later, I cracked my neck, then smoothed back my hair. I couldn't die yet. Twenty-four and I hadn't got a proper New Year's Eve kiss—the ones from Aunt Sue and Uncle Hugh when I was twelve sure as hell didn't count. I glanced at the body, still not breathing. Stupid fucker. Like I said, I'd been through this before. Numerous times, in fact, since I'd turned twenty-one, and always just before some holiday. This year's attempt simply happened to fall on New Year's Eve.

Him or me. Seemed I was forever watching my back. Survival didn't count against your record to the big guy, did it? I drew my weapon, tapped on the glass separating me from the driver. The light flicked on as the windows separated, and, with a firm nudge to the back of his head, I got his attention. "Pull it over. I'm out of here."

Sweat trickled down his face from under his cap, but he didn't try anything funny, just pulled the beast onto the shoulder and hit the locks. I couldn't help but take a final look at the man called Steve, the same man that finally, who after months of wining and dining, I'd decided to give my heart. Greed's a motherfucker. With each passing year, I hated being me a little more. Pathetic for someone so young, my next thought. The driver revved the engine. "Good man," I said upon exiting into the cold, dry air. 

Without hesitation, he whipped the limo around and headed back toward town. I wouldn't have hurt him. Not like any driver had a dog in the fucked-up power struggle I knew as the status quo. The star-filled sky came better into focus the farther from me he got, and before his taillights were out of sight, I found myself surrounded by darkness, night sounds, and a thick blanket of stars. I pulled out my cell phone— Great! The air left my lungs. No service. Just how far into the mountains was I?


Happy Holidays!


Bryl R. Tyne is a wrangler by nature and a writer by choice, published with Noble Romance Publishing, Ravenous Romance, Dreamspinner Press, STARbooks Press, Untreed Reads Publishing, Changeling Press, Amber Quill Press, and Riptide Publishing. Check out Bryl's bi-monthly column: My Way   Find out more about the author at: bryltyne.com






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